The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The provided diagram outlines the process of how carbonated drinks are made. A detailed analysis reveals that during the first stage named

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water

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cleaning, at first stored raw

water

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in a warehouse is filtered through a filter connected with a warehouse and a big tanker. After

filteration

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filtration

water

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is transferred to a big tanker, where

water

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siftener

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softener

softeners

and chemicals are mixed into

water

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, and

afterwards

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through a

pump

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this

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water

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is converted to

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electric heater. At

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point,

second

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the second

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stage is started. In

this

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phase

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phase,

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electric heaters are connected with a cooling pipe. Through

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pipe,

water

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is converted to the carbonation machine where

water

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is evaporated. Meanwhile, in the next

phase

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carbonation

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the carbonation

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machine

tranfers

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transfers

transforms

carbonated

water

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to the mixing tank. In

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mixing tank

color

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colour

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, syrup and flavour

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are

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added,

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indicates the third stage. During

second

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the second

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last

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apply

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phase

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, connected filter with the mixing tank

fill

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fills

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the bottles and cans, and

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finally

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these bottles and cans are packed and dispathed to the supermarket.

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, the given process is categorised into five stages, commencing with the

water

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cleaning

phase

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, proceeding to the heating and mixing, and concluding with the packaging.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, phase with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

192 words

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