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The graph below show the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below show the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of average change in the cost of copper, nickel, and zinc throughout the year 2014.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is apparent that the price of the three metals showed a continuous fluctuation over the twelve months. In January, the percentage of price change of copper was 6%, which dropped to -3% in June, registering the lowest price shift. The proportion reached -1% in July, where it remained steady until September.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average
  • change
  • prices
  • metals
  • rise
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • stabilize
  • sharp
  • stable
  • months
  • features
  • compare
  • report
  • during
  • 2014
  • data
  • rise
  • decline
  • prices
  • metal
  • show
  • suggest
  • overall
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