You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: • explain why you chose to study English at the school • describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about my recent experience attending a series of English lessons at your institution. I chose to take English courses at your academy because it is near my house, and I saw your post on Instagram stating that you have excellent teachers for learning English. I was excited to learn there.
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, when I started the courses, it was not what I expected. My teacher was not a native speaker and had difficulty communicating clearly, which made it hard for me to understand. When I asked another student for help, they
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did not understand the material. I suggest that you improve your school by hiring native speakers or teachers who have more experience and skills in teaching.
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is very important for your students’ learning. I look forward to your response. Kind regards, Lolo Ahmed

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and supports it well.
task achievement
Try to explain your feelings and experiences in more detail for a better connection.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear greeting and closing.
task achievement
You clearly stated what problems you faced during the lessons.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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