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Band 2.5

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Introduction
There is no
deyning
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denying
 the fact that how
imporance
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importance
important
for reading
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to read
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books
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 in general
while
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 it is a commonly held
belife
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belief
beliefs
 there are many advantages for
e-
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e-books
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books
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 there is
also
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 an argument that many individuals prefer the old method
for
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of
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 reading.
Body · 1
This
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 essay will
analyes
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analyse
analyze
this
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 topic from both
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 of view and express my opinion.
Body · 2
On
one
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the one
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 hand e-
books
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 it is better for many reasons
for example
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 it is
chepper
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cheaper
 than paper
books
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.
Body · 3
In other words
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most
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the biggest
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 advantage
for
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of
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 e-
books
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 it is easy to carry
it
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apply
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,
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this
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which
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make
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allows
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 any person
donlowd
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to
the
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a
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 book
in
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on
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 his phone or laptop.
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, if you go
in
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on
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trip
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a trip
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 you
dont
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don't
 think about how to take many
books
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 with you in your bags or worry about the weight.
Body · 4
On the other hand
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, paper
book
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books
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 make you feel better
due to
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 you take the book with you carry it and touch
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the papers
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papers
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paper
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smell
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and smell
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 it.
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,
i
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 see it
is cost
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costs
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 a lot of money.
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for
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For
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 instance you may have to buy a lot of
books
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 even when you
not
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are not
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 sure if you will read
it
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them
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 or
no
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not
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.
Conclusion
In
conclustion
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conclusion
, there
are
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is
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 no easy
answer
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answers
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 to
this
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 question, On balance,
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however
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however,
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 I tend to believe That
in
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apply
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these days
the
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apply
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e-
books
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better
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are better
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 than
papers
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paper
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books
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.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to fix spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. This makes your writing clearer.
task achievement
Try to state your opinion more clearly in the introduction and conclusion. This helps the reader understand your view better.
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Use clear examples to support your points. This makes your argument stronger and easier to follow.
task achievement
You have good ideas about the advantages and disadvantages of e-books and paper books.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay structure is clear with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • interactive features
  • accessibility
  • vast library
  • promotions
  • deforestation
  • visual impairments
  • reading disabilities
  • burden
  • enhance
  • save money
  • reading experience
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