There are different opinions about how corporate
sponsorship
affects the world of Use synonyms
sports
. Some people think that it is Use synonyms
beneficail
for the Correct your spelling
beneficial
sports
world, Use synonyms
whereas
others argue that it is detrimental. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both views before presenting my own.
First of all, Corporate Linking Words
sponsorship
facilitates Use synonyms
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sports
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event
. Different Fix the agreement mistake
events
companies
sponsor different Use synonyms
sports
events, resulting in more Use synonyms
audience
being attracted to Fix the agreement mistake
audiences
such
events. With the increase in popularity, more tickets will be bought leading to a financial injection into the industry. Following Linking Words
which
, organizing competitions would be done, at a consistent rate and without any complications. An example of Correct pronoun usage
this
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case is the Linking Words
Olympics
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Olympic
game
which are held every four Fix the agreement mistake
games
year
, gaining more and more popularity through Change to a plural noun
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such
deals. Linking Words
Secondly
, these sponsorships make competitions more exciting. The influx of money, brought by Linking Words
companies
, will provide athletes with Use synonyms
a
better financial support, easing the purchase of better Remove the article
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equipments
and usage of high-quality facilities. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
This
means better training for Linking Words
atletes
, Correct your spelling
athletes
as well as
better performances, adding Linking Words
excitements
to events.
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excitement
On the other hand
, advertising some products can undermine the true spirit of Linking Words
sports
. Use synonyms
Although
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sports
used to be a way of promoting people's Use synonyms
wellbeing
, both physically and mentally, nowadays Correct your spelling
well-being
companies
are regarding the Use synonyms
sports
industry as a lucrative Use synonyms
bussiness
rather than Correct your spelling
business
contributting
to people's health condition. Correct your spelling
contributing
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instance
some Add a comma
instance,
companies
are advertising products Use synonyms
such
as sugary drinks and Linking Words
tobacoo
which are harmful to health. Correct your spelling
tobacco
Moreover
, Linking Words
Sponsorship
deals can sometimes result in athletes being viewed as products rather than individuals. Use synonyms
Such
advertisements can divert Linking Words
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attention away from the real Correct article usage
apply
idendity
, overlooking their emotions and beliefs.
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identity
conclusion
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conclusion,
i
believe that corporate Change the capitalization
I
sponsorship
is highly valuable for the world of Use synonyms
sports
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due to
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extra
revenue it generates and Correct article usage
the extra
excitement
it adds. Any drawbacks could be avoided Correct article usage
the excitement
through
implementing stricter supervision of advertised brands.Change preposition
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