Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are different opinions about how corporate

sponsorship

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affects the world of

sports

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. Some people think that it is

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beneficial

for the

sports

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world,

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others argue that it is detrimental.

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essay will discuss both views before presenting my own. First of all, Corporate

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facilitates

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of

sports

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event

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events

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. Different

companies

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sponsor different

sports

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events, resulting in more

audience

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audiences

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being attracted to

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events. With the increase in popularity, more tickets will be bought leading to a financial injection into the industry. Following

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, organizing competitions would be done, at a consistent rate and without any complications. An example of

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case is the

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game

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games

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which are held every four

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, gaining more and more popularity through

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deals.

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, these sponsorships make competitions more exciting. The influx of money, brought by

companies

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, will provide athletes with

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better financial support, easing the purchase of better

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and usage of high-quality facilities.

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means better training for

atletes

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athletes

,

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better performances, adding

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to events.

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, advertising some products can undermine the true spirit of

sports

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.

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sports

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used to be a way of promoting people's

wellbeing

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well-being

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, both physically and mentally, nowadays

companies

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are regarding the

sports

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industry as a lucrative

bussiness

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business

rather than

contributting

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contributing

to people's health condition.

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some

companies

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are advertising products

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as sugary drinks and

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tobacco

which are harmful to health.

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,

Sponsorship

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deals can sometimes result in athletes being viewed as products rather than individuals.

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advertisements can divert

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attention away from the real

idendity

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identity

, overlooking their emotions and beliefs. In

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believe that corporate

sponsorship

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is highly valuable for the world of

sports

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due to

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extra

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revenue it generates and

excitement

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the excitement

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it adds. Any drawbacks could be avoided

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implementing stricter supervision of advertised brands.