5 June 2025, The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.

5 June 2025, The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 5 June 2025, The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
The pie chart depicts the allocation of the UAE government’s AED 315
billion
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budget
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in the year 2000.
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, the social security sector made up the majority of the total spending,
whereas
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most other sectors were allocated less than half that
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amount. Nearly 50
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AED of the total expenditure went to health and personal social services.
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represented the second largest share of the national
budget
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, behind social security, which received 100
billion
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AED.
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for education, the government distributed 38
billion
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, followed by the defence sector at 22
billion
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. There
were
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also
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the same
budget
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in
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debt interest and other
expenditure
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expenditures
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, allocated 23
billion
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for both.
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, the other three sectors obtained less than 20
billion
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of the national
budget
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,
which
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were law and order, housing heritage and environment, and industry, agriculture and employment.
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was granted 17
billion
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, 15
billion
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, and 13
billion
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in each respective
categories
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category
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.
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, transportation had the least amount of spending among all categories, accounting for 9
billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, budget with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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