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The given flow chart represents the standardized process of getting an US driving permit. A brief overview is that the process begins with visiting the licence centre and concludes with passing the test prior to receiving the licence. Regarding the preparation stage, people are first required to complete an application at the licence centre only to have their eyes checked. After passing the eye test, they will proceed to pay a fee as failing results in no licence after which the procedure will carry on to the actual test. Turning to the actual exam, a written test must be taken and re-taken if necessary until the minimum requirements are met. After completing the written test, the driving test will take place in which failing leads to no re-do which further required to re-pay the fee to try again the whole testing process. On the other hand, passing the driving test means a driving permit will be handed as soon as possible.

The given flow chart represents the standardized process of getting an US driving permit. A brief overview is that the process begins with visiting the licence centre and concludes with passing the test prior to receiving the licence. Regarding the preparation stage, people are first required to complete an application at the licence centre only to have their eyes checked. After passing the eye test, they will proceed to pay a fee as failing results in no licence after which the procedure will carry on to the actual test. Turning to the actual exam, a written test must be taken and re-taken if necessary until the minimum requirements are met. After completing the written test, the driving test will take place in which failing leads to no re-do which further required to re-pay the fee to try again the whole testing process. On the other hand, passing the driving test means a driving permit will be handed as soon as possible.
The given flow chart represents the standardized process of getting a US driving permit. A brief overview is that the process begins with visiting the
licence
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 centre and concludes with passing the
test
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 prior to receiving the
licence
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. Regarding the preparation stage, people are first required to complete an application at the
licence
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 centre only to have their eyes checked. After passing the eye
test
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, they will proceed to pay a fee as failing results in no
licence
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 after which the procedure will carry on to the actual
test
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. Turning to the actual exam, a written
test
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 must be taken and re-taken if necessary until the minimum requirements are met. After completing the written
test
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, the driving
test
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 will take place in which failing leads to no re-do which
further
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 required to re-pay the fee to try again the whole testing process.
On the other hand
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, passing the driving
test
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 means a driving permit will be handed in as soon as possible.

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