Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Enviromental
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Environmental
issues have become one of the most urgent challenges of our time.
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some believe these problems should be approached globally, others demand national governments to take the lead. I firmly believe that tackling
this
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problem globally is ultimately more effective. Many
enviromental
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environmental
problems cross borders. Climate change, global warming and ocean pollution affect the entire planet. One
country
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's efforts may not be waster if others continue polluting.
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, carbon emissions from one
country
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can impact the global
tempratures
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temperatures
temperature
.
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, global cooperation is necessary. International agreements like
Paris
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the Paris
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Accord
unites
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unite
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the nations to solve a problem and
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provides
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funding for poorer countries to ensure stability.
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, dealing with
enviromental
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environmental
issues nationally allows for faster action and better control. Each
country
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has unique issues and solutions
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.
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, a
country
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suffering from
deforastation
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deforestation
can launch
tree
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a tree
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planting campaign,
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another facing water pollution can invest in clean water technologies. Governments are able to create laws, fund green projects, and educate their citizens based on local needs. National actions
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avoid delays
vaused
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caused
by international agreements, which can take years to implement. In conclusion,
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national
efforst
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efforts
effort
are important,
enviromental
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environmental
problems must be solved through global cooperation. Only by working
together
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together,
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we can protect our planet for future generations.

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writing error
Make sure to proofread your work for spelling errors, such as 'enviromental' instead of 'environmental' and 'deforastation' instead of 'deforestation'.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples for national solutions to improve your points.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer transitions between your ideas to improve flow.
task response
You presented a clear opinion in your introduction.
task achievement
You included relevant examples to support your arguments.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental degradation
  • climate change
  • global collaboration
  • sustainable practices
  • international agreements
  • local issues
  • tailored solutions
  • accountability
  • economic interests
  • dual approach
  • environmental health
  • pollution management
  • resource-sharing
  • policy implementation
  • collective action
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