An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain -where did you find this information -why you want to apply this job -what qualification you have -what position you want to apply

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in applying for the IT Technician
position
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as advertised in "The Times News" two days ago. I am particularly interested in
this
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opportunity as your company mainly focus on providing IT cloud services to all major clients in the city.
In addition
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, I am learning an advanced Azure course in Information Technology.
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, working in
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position
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while
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studying helps me gain practical knowledge.
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, I have a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science & Engineering, and I have 1.5 years of relevant work experience in the same
position
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with my previous company.
As a result
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, I believe that I would be a suitable candidate for
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position
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. I would be grateful
,
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apply
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if I get
this
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opportunity to work as an IT Technician in your company. Please let me know if I have to share any
further
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information to proceed
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apply
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further
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. I look forward to hearing your response at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Jeevitha S

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grammar
Polish grammar and connect ideas in one paragraph. Use 'focuses' not 'focus' when you talk about the company.
structure
Make a new paragraph for each main idea: 1) where you found the job, 2) why you want the job, 3) your skills and work exp, 4) closing line.
tone
Say 'I would be grateful to have this opportunity' instead of 'I would be grateful, if I get this opportunity'.
conciseness
Check for repetitions like 'proceed further' and 'further' to avoid extra words.
content
Clear goal stated at start with job name and source.
tone
Good closing and polite tone.
content
Mentions relevant study and experience.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • company
  • job
  • work
  • experience
  • careers page
  • found
  • information
  • apply
  • position
  • temporary
  • intern
  • team
  • learn
  • skill
  • study
  • course
  • language
  • computer
  • English
  • resume
  • CV
  • start
  • availability
  • deadline
  • thank you
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