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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

Dear Julianne, I am writing to you to answer and give you tips on how to learn and drive like a professional. I am thrilled that you are
finally
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 showing interest in driving. It will be very convenient for you in terms of transportation to work or just maybe for relaxation. The first thing I suggest you
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do to get a driver's license, it's a must and required by law for you to have your license first before you even have to drive. Now, I know it might be a hassle to think about taking the exams but it'
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 be beneficial to you, as to why? Having a license won't get you
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 law.
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, you can use it if you travel to another country and want to rent a car or motorcycle to tour the place or country.
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, I urge you to
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 in
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officialn
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 driving school, so that you'
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 learn the basic knowledge of driving. It will be good for you, in that
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 you'
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 learn from the professionals and you'
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 get the perception
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 the proper
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etiquette
 of driving.
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, I recommend
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you practice
 on an app or like a driving game simulator;
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, real-life practice is really where you can learn. I hope you'
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 do great on with your driving skills. Best of luck my friend! Kind regards, Ashley

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has one main idea to make your letter clearer.
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Organize your thoughts better to improve the flow of your ideas.
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Check for grammar and spelling mistakes to enhance your overall message.
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Use a more friendly tone to make your letter feel more personal and warm.
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You show enthusiasm for your friend's interest in driving.
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You give good reasons for why a driver's license is important.
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