The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The map depicts the southwest airport now and after its renovation next year.

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, new facilities and

option

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options

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including a bag drop, an ATM, a car park and a sky train will be added. The

gates

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and the exit and entrance doors will be expanded. Upon entering the airport, a check-in and a café are located on either side of the floor. Next to them, is passport control and

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security

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section. After the latter, 8

gates

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are surrounding

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the walkway, engulfing it. In

arrivals

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, there is a passport control before the customs which is located across from

arrivals

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. After renovation, both departure and

arrivals

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will be expanded. The check-in will be moved to

right

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corner and the café to the left corner, in order to make more space for a new bag drop. New shops will be constructed between the security and the first gate. New

gates

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with two branching corridors will be built, which enable the passengers to access more than twice as many

gates

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as now (18

gates

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). The walkway will be replaced with a sky train and a car park, an ATM and a café will be constructed at the right side of the

arrivals

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Jun 9, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to improve the flow of ideas by using connecting words like 'first', 'next', and 'finally'. This will help the reader follow your points more easily.

task response

Make sure to clearly state the main changes in the airport and explain their significance to show complete understanding of the task.

coherence and cohesion

Consider adding a brief conclusion that summarizes the main points of the redevelopment.

task achievement

The essay clearly describes the current state of the airport and the proposed changes, which meets the task's requirements.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

199 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

terminal
car park
runways
redevelopment
proposed changes
expanded terminals
new gates
additional parking
amenities
navigation
environmental impact
economic impact
job creation
traffic congestion

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Fully explain your ideas

Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults why do many adults stop doing physical exercise ? what can be done about this problem ?