The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
The diagram illustrates the percentage of four different matters that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a certain country.
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, three materials had similar increasing trends in recycling rates from 1990 to 2010. In the same period, the paper and cardboard
rate
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increased in the first four years,
then
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it was steadily declining. The recycling activity for aluminium cans started in 1986,
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it was initiated 4 years later for plastics. From 1982 to 1990, the paper and cardboard recycling
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had a quite similar declining pattern with glass containers except in 1986. Both materials reached their lowest recycling rates in 1990. The recycling
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of paper and cardboard was approximately 60.5 per cent,
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that of glass containers stood at 40 per cent. In 1986 aluminium cans were first recycled at
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per cent
rate
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.
This
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value was similar to the recycling activity
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of plastics which was started in the four next years, 1990. From 1990 onwards, these two materials and glass containers had steadily rising patterns of recycling rates.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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