The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the main transformation that took place in a public
library
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in a 2-decade period.
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,
it is clear that
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the
library
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has become much more
modernize
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, with more
venuation
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veneration
and reading facilities. In the past, there were six main sectors shown on the map. The enquiry desk was situated
at
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the right side, where people can
got
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tickets or
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the book. On the left side, it provided people with space to read
the
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newspapers and
magazine
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magazines
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. There were two tables in the middle of the
library
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, and adults’ books were placed beside
it
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them
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. In the deepest part of the
library
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is
children’s
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the children’s
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area. At present, several changes are observed. The enquiry desk is converted into a café. Some self-service machines are built in front of it.
Reading
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room
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replaced by a computer room, and the children’s area
are
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now
advance
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into
lecture
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a lecture
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room and storytelling area, with some sofas equipped. The
table
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tables
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are diminished and
adults
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adults'
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book
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books
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are now
become
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all reference books. Adults fiction books
is
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now moved to the right side of the
library
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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