The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates the comparison of three fields where India's gross domestic products were used between 1960 and 2000. From an
overall
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perspective, throughout the given period, usage of domestic products in agriculture significantly dropped,
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on sphere of services
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underwent a sharp climb. Looking at the details, in 1960,
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proportion in agriculture reached the highest point, at approximately 60%,
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indicator in fields of industry and services was almost the same, at around 15%. Over the next 20 years, usage of household products in agronomy experienced a
dramatical
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decline of 15%, whilst the other two proportions steadily increased. During the next 20 years, contribution to industry remained stable, at 25%. After the sharp rocket of contribution household items in services in 1990,
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field reached its peak,
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agriculture reached the lowest point at 65% and 15%, respectively. During the given period, contributions of India's gross domestic product in industry gradually increased by 10%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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