Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take

Dear Sir or Madam I have received your letter regarding
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about the noise from my apartment.
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, I have decided to write
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letter to answer your concerns. First of all, I would like to inform you that there are wedding rituals taking place at my home as it is my sister's marriage next week. Many relatives have arrived in the past few days and they are doing rehearsals for the big day.
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, I am really sorry for the disturbance that it caused to you and your family
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the loud music. We really did not want to hurt anyone and we understand that it can be disturbing for anyone. If we were at your place we would have
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complained.
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, I assure you that we will take care of the volume and noise from our onwards. We will ensure that all the curtains and doors are closed
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rehearsing so that the neighbours don't get annoyed and can get good sleep.
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, I would like to thank you for your patience and I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience which I caused. Yours faithfully, James Stirling

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Task Achievement
Consider adding a brief introduction about the purpose of your letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try keeping one main idea per paragraph to improve clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to use a more personal closing to enhance warmth.
Task Achievement
You expressed your apology sincerely, which is important in this context.
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The letter maintains a polite tone throughout, which is commendable.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sincere apologies
  • inconvenience
  • disturbance
  • earnestly
  • unfortunately
  • recently
  • necessary repairs
  • soundproofing
  • appropriate hours
  • notify
  • regrettable
  • considerate
  • peace and quiet
  • appreciate your understanding
  • steps to mitigate
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