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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorway and what solutions are there?

Nowadays motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they
also
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 cause
problemsas
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problems
.
As a result
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 of that many
car
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 crashes
happining
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happening
laitly
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lately
, and to stop
this
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 from
happining
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happening
 the government should be more strict about
motors
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 . First of all, using motorways as
a
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the
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 main way to go from
place
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one place
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 to
other
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another
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 could lead to
car
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 crashs,
that
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which
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 means
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this
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these
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motors
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 will crash with the cars and buses
becuse
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because
 they are faster.
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Furthermore
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Furthermore,
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 many people
loves
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love
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 to use
this
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 way to transform from one place to
other
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another
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,
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according
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apply
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to a recent study shows that 12% of
pepole
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people
 prefer to use
motors
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than
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over
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 cars.
Moreover
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, one of the strong solutions
that
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is that
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, the state could use the money to decrease
this
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 problem
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for
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, for
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 example, the person who makes many
car
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 crashes and
not
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does not
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recpicting
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respecting
 the
rols
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roads
 the state may charge them a cost of money. All in all,
motors
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 lead to many problems and one of them is
car
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 crashes, and to stop
this
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 from
happining
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happening
 the city may
cust
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cost
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them
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their
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amount
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an amount
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 of money from that.

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task achievement
Make sure every idea you write directly answers the question. You need to explain the problems and then give clear solutions for each problem.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs, and each should focus on one main idea. Make sure to link your ideas properly to make your essay more logical.
task achievement
Provide specific examples to support your points. This helps the reader understand your ideas better and see how they relate to real life.
coherence and cohesion
Pay attention to spelling and grammar. Mistakes make it harder to understand your message. Proofread your work before finishing.
content
You have identified a current issue related to motorways, which is good. It shows you understand the topic.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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