The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
Presented for consideration is a diagram which
illustrate
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illustrates
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information pertaining to
life
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the life
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cycle of
salmons
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.
Overall
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, the 6-stage process commences with laid eggs and
ended
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with
mating
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the mating
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mature
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salmons
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.
Additionally
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, it is evident that
salmons
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have three main phases related to their forms.
To begin
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with, the salmon eggs are laid in the bottom of a river with slow flowing where they are surrounded by reeds and rocks
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5 to 6 months.
Then
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, the eggs hatch into newborn fish which
is
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are
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3-8-cm
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3-8 cm
length
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in length
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and
so-call
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so-called
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"fry"
entry
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enter
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lower
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the lower
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river with fast flowing for approximately 4 years before they move to the next stage of their lives when they
experiences
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minor
change
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in size. In the following step,
salmons
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grow up and turn into "smolt" which is 12-
15-cm
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15 cm
length
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in length
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. After that, these
salmons
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continue to enter
open
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the open
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sea where they spend
aroung
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around
5 years of their lives
to live
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living
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here and flirt opposite-sexed
salmons
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. Once they are grown enough, the "smolt" becomes "adult salmon" which is not only significantly bigger than in size at about 70 to 76 cm
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but
also
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possesses
iconic
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the iconic
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colour of its flesh.
Subsequently
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, these
salmons
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mate
their
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with their
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partners, and
then
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the female fish turn to the river where they are born in order to reproduce, and
then
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the cycle continues.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmons with synonyms.
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