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6. The diagram below shows changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

6. The diagram below shows changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
The given maps illustrate the arrangements of
Felixstone
Correct your spelling
Felixstowe
 in the UK in 1967 and 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the western area of the town only experienced slight transformations
while
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 the other side underwent significant modifications. Regarding the west of the site, most parts of the layout remained the same. Specifically, the golf course, area of trees and dunes stayed in their original positions.
In addition
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, the hotel and the cafe next to the centre area were
also
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 retained.
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, a line of windmilks was erected between the dunes and the sea and a new parking lot was constructed for the hotel. Turning to the southern and middle zones, the array of shops located on the right of the high street was converted into residential areas
whereas
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 the other array was preserved.
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the former farmland was transformed into a large hotel with a separate pool and two tennis yards.
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 but not least, the coastal site used to have a fish market and harbour in 1967 turned into public and private beaches within the next 34 years.

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