The diagram below shows changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001

The given maps illustrate the development of

Felixstone

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Felixstowe

, a town in the UK in 1967 and 2001.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the western area of the town only experienced slight transformations

while

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the other side underwent significant modifications. Regarding the west of the site, most parts of the layout remained the same. Specifically, the golf course, the woodland and

dunes

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the dunes

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stayed in their original positions.

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, the hotel and the cafe next to the centre area were

also

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retained.

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, a line of windmills was erected between the dunes and the sea and a new parking lot was constructed for the hotel. As for the central and southern zones of the town, the row of shops located to the right of the high street was converted into residential areas

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the other row was preserved.

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the former farmland was transformed into a large hotel with a separate pool and two tennis courts.

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, the coastal site, which used to have a fish market and harbour in 1967, was turned into public and private beaches by 2001.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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