One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his/her new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter, • give your opinion of your friend's business idea • tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer • and explain your reasons for this deci

Dear Neha, I hope

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letter finds you well! Thanks for thinking of me as a potential partner for your new start-up.

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means a lot to me that you value my input and trust me enough to consider me for

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venture. I think your business idea is fantastic. The market for eco-friendly products is already booming, and your plan to offer sustainable alternatives for everyday items is both timely and commendable. I can see a lot of potential in

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, especially with the growing awareness about

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environment

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issues.

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, after giving

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thought, I've decided that I won'

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be able to join you as

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right now.

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wasn'

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an easy decision but I had to consider my current commitments and future plans. The main reason for not being a partner is that I'm already deeply involved in a few projects which require my full attention and time. So, I don'

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want to commit to you now as I know I won'

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be able to give

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full dedication it requires.

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, I am planning to pursue

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studies soon that even take up more of my time and energy. I'm genuinely happy

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your new career, and

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excited to see you as a growing businessman, if you need any help whether in terms of finances or ideas please feel free to reach

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out. Wishing you all the best! Warm Regards, Amanjot

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task achievement

Consider adding more detail about your friend's business idea to strengthen your opinion.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has one clear idea to enhance clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Try to make your closing wish more personal to strengthen the connection with your friend.

suitable writing tone

You maintained a kind and warm tone throughout the letter, which is very appropriate for a response to a friend.

logical structure

Your letter had a clear structure with distinct sections for each point you wanted to address.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

238 words

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