The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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pie chart and table illustrate the main reasons why agricultural
land
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became less productive and how these causes affected three regions in North America,
Europe
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, and Oceania during the 1990s.
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, the main causes of global
land
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degradation were over-grazing,
deforestation
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, and
over-cultivation
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, with over-grazing being the most significant contributor. Among the three regions,
Europe
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experienced the highest percentage of degraded
land
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.
According to
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the pie chart, over-grazing accounted for 35% of global
land
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degradation, followed by
deforestation
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at 30%, and
over-cultivation
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at 28%. The remaining 7% was
due to
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other causes. The table reveals that
Europe
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had the most serious
land
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degradation, with 23% of its
land
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affected. The primary reason in
Europe
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was
deforestation
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9.8%, followed by
over-cultivation
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7.7% and over-grazing 5.5%. In Oceania, 13% of
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land
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was degraded, with over-grazing 11.3% being the main cause, and no
over-cultivation
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reported
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. North America had the lowest percentage 5%, where
over-cultivation
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3.3% was the leading cause,
while
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deforestation
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and over-grazing contributed less. In conclusion, over-grazing was the major cause worldwide, and
Europe
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was the most affected region
overall
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, europe, deforestation, over-cultivation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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