17 June 2025, The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

17 June 2025, The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 17 June 2025, The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.
The line graph depicts the yearly profit of three different bakeries in Calgary from 2000 to 2010.
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, the annual earnings of the Mari Bakeshop declined gradually with small dips over the given
period
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, whilst that of the Bolo Cakery showed an increasing trend. Meanwhile, the Amandine Bakery had earned steady over the first half of the
period
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before rising gradually. From 2000 to 2005, the yearly income of Amandine remained unchanged at just under 60000
dollars
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.
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, starting in 2006, their income rose slightly to exactly 60000 and continued to increase over the next four years, reaching a peak income of over 100000 in 2010.
By comparison
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although
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Mari had the largest profit compared to others in the first five years despite the fluctuation (800000 – 600000
dollars
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), the figure tended to decline in the rest of
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period
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, making up the lowest earnings among other bakeries since 2008 (40000
dollars
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).
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, after having a slight fluctuation between 2000 and 2002, the total amount of Bolo’s annual earnings doubled in 2003 and stayed constant until 2006. Interestingly, it surpassed Mari’s profit in 2008 by 60000
dollars
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before rising moderately in the final
period
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.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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