17 June 2025, The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

17 June 2025, The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 17 June 2025, The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates the total
number
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of international
students
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pursuing study in the
four
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different countries in 2004 and 2012, the table shows the percentage of them
on
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the same countries and years.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of international
students
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in the USA was the largest among the
four
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over the period,
while
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Canada became the lowest.
In contrast
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, international
students
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in Australia had the largest share. Regarding the bar chart, the total
number
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of international
students
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increased in the
four
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nations with the USA
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the most common destination, accounting for 180000 people in 2004 and nearly 250000 people in 2012. An equal
number
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of over 100000
recorded
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both in the UK and Australia by 2004, whilst in the next period they
also
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had a slight difference at under 200000. Meanwhile, there were less than 70000 international
students
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in Canada, making it the lowest
number
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during the given period. As for the table, almost all
four
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countries showed an increasing trend, except for the USA which remained unchanged at 2% in both years. Australia not only had the largest percentage of overseas
students
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but
also
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had a slightly larger increase
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5%, rising from 19% to 24%. The figure
followed
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is followed
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by the UK (9% to 13%) and Canada (5% to 7%).

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, four with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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