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Some people believe AI generated art should be valued the same as human-made art. Why this happening? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some individuals believe that art AI has equal meaning compared with human-made art.
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 phenomenon and go on to explain why
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 cutting-edge
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 has drawbacks in society. One reason why some people consider AI
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 needs to be paid as the human-made receive is the accuracy. The advancement of AI was not only used for creating an
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 built to help people recognize faces around the world.
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, police departments
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 to recognize a criminal only by a platform AI. They input data of a suspect in an application. After that, AI would process it, resulting in an
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 of a suspect that can assist Policemen to catch the criminal. Another reason is time safety. When using AI, somebody can manage their time efficiently.
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, an architect could
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 AI to create architecture
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 doing other jobs. These reasons make people believe AI should be valued the same as human-made.
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, I take the view that AI development has negative impacts on society because it threatens artists' social lives. Individuals who rely on art jobs could be replaced by
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 can lead to economic problems. Another reason is a lack of creativity. Some applications,
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 by using a prompt. When someone runs
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 app, they tend to
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 the same prompt on the internet. The more keywords they
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, the more probability that the
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 could be the same as others.
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 can lead us to shift focus from deep creativity to fast content generation. In summary, even though AI is really helpful as an assistant for minorities and
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 gives a fast and quick result, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure your paragraphs have a clear main idea and support it with examples.
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Clearly state your opinion in the introduction and conclusion.
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Use more specifics to explain your points, like examples of art, to strengthen your argument.
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You provided reasons for your opinion about AI art.
coherence and cohesion
You made a clear point about the impact of AI on artists' jobs.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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