The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the development of the village of
Ryemouth
Correct your spelling
Tynemouth
between 1995 and now.
Overall
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,
while
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there are several transformations between these two maps, the most notable changes are the renovation of the northeast area and the deconstruction of the fishing port.
To begin
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with, some parts still remain today,
although
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minor changes were added.
For example
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, the housing area was enlarged to the western direction as the road was expanded, and some residences were built along that road.
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,
whereas
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the cafe did not change any aspect, the hotel located on the north side of that cafe obtained the parking area.
On the other hand
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, the shops and fish markets, which were positioned on the southwest side in 1995, are currently playing different roles. Specifically, the buildings leveraged as the shops in 1995 became restaurants, and those used as fish markets were renovated into apartments.
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, the areas of the farmland and the forest park, which were originally separated in 1995, were integrated and those lands are currently being used as spaces where people can play golf and tennis. In comparison,
this
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village became able to accommodate more people
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the increase in the number of residential buildings.
On the other hand
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, the residents, who still live there, lost access to fresh seafood because both the fishing port and fish market cannot be found on the current map.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • key features
  • contrasting
  • developments
  • alterations
  • enhancements
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • emerging
  • adaptation
  • population growth
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • preserve
  • aesthetics
  • analytically
  • livability
  • notable facilities
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