Writing about a new words you learn it from last level

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with, some high-level standing
vocable
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I learned over the
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two months in
this
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school. As you know the English language has more than 500, so it is good for me if I know half of them. When I say high-level
vocablary
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vocabulary
I mean in B2 and C1 levels.
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"Surroundings"
this
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word means things near me, " I'm in my room and the surroundings me my books,laptop and for sure my phone. Other idioms like "Log, food and Branch", so when you need to set fire you need to use a lot of logs that already come from the trees , especially from one or more branches. Flooding, that water covered the streets after rain. It's really high-level vocable for me
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I think that amazing words you can use to talk about some situations in real life,I mean close to my simple life.
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as when I'm in the desert with my friends in the Winter we must sit on fire to make us feel warm, so the logs are useful for us. Actually, there are people who use it
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for decoration inside their houses.
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, that stage was hard for me, but in my view, it boosted my English vocabulary, and skills to be more clear and know I can speak about different topics because now I have enough words and numbers from the English language. Learning is very important new things between time and time and that will give you a lot of pieces of information.

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Check your grammar and spelling to make your writing clearer. Some words are misspelled, which can confuse the reader.
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You have shared interesting vocabulary words that you learned. It's great that you are trying to use new words!
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