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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

Writing about a new words you learn in last your level

To begin
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 with, some high-level standing
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 I learned
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over
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 the
last
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 two months in
this
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 school. As you know the English language has more than 500, so it is good for me if I know half of them. When I say high-level
words
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 I mean in B2 and C1 levels.
For example
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 "Surroundings"
this
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 word means things near me, " I'm in my room and the surroundings me my books,laptop and for sure my phone. Other
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 like "Log, food and Branch", so when you need to set fire you need to use a lot of logs that already come from the trees , especially from one or more branches. Flooding, that water covered the streets after rain. It's really high-level
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 for me
also
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 I think that amazing
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 you can use to talk about some situations in real life,I mean close to my simple life.
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 as when I'm in the desert with my friends in the Winter we must sit on fire to make us feel warm, so the logs are useful for us.
Finally
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, that stage was hard for me, but in my view, it boosted my English vocabulary, and skills to be more clear and know I can speak about different topics because now I have enough
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 and numbers from the English language. Learning is very important new things between time and time and that will give you a lot of pieces of information.

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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.
task achievement
Make sure to explain new words clearly. Give examples that show how they are used in sentences.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words (like 'firstly', 'next', 'finally') to help connect your ideas.
task achievement
You have shown enthusiasm for learning new words, which is great!

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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