Write a letter to an accommodation agency for change in your accommodations (150 words) - explain your past requirements - why do you want to change your current accommodations - what are your requirements for the new accommodations

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to request you

for changing

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to change

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my accommodation.

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last

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month an apartment was rented by me with the reference of your agency in the downtown area. I selected that unit for residing because it was near my office.

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, it fulfilled the requirement of a private parking space for my car.

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, I want to change my accommodation

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the next month because

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disturbance happens at late night. There is loud music at midnight which is played by a restaurant near my building, and

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results in sleepless nights. I feel very tired at the office because I do not get sufficient rest. As my office is in the downtown, I hope you will find me a better house to reside peacefully in the same area.

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, if it is possible please find me a private room which fits

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my budget.

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, I want to rent a ground floor apartment so it will be convenient for me. I hope you will consider my request. Yours faithfully, Karan

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task achievement

Include a specific deadline for the accommodation change request to make it clearer.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear paragraph breaks to separate different ideas, making it easier to read.

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Try to provide more details about the characteristics you want in your new accommodation, such as size or amenities.

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Your letter has a polite tone which is suitable for a formal request.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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