The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.

The aforementioned bar graph illustrates the difficulties faced by immigrants based on their

age

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groups.

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, the chart indicates that making friends becomes less challenging as individuals

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, the number of people experiencing difficulties in other categories tends to decrease with

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. Focusing on the youngest

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group, making friends is their primary challenge, affecting almost half of

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demographic.

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is closely followed by issues related to accommodation, which accounts for two-fifths. Interestingly, the percentage of individuals aged 35 to 54 who struggle to find housing is similar, at 39%. The remaining issues,

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as learning the local language and forming friendships, reveal comparable percentages of 35% and 36%, respectively.

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, when examining the senior citizens' group, more than half report that 'learning the local language' is a significant issue. The second most pressing challenge for

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demographic is forming friendships, which represents 23%, followed by the difficulty of finding a place to live, accounting for 22%.

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