the diagram below shows how geothermal emergy is used to produce electricity

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electric

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electricity

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from geothermal energy. It shows the information about each step and what

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does in detail.

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, the process contains five main steps which

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are

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named

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apply

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cold

water

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, the injection well, the production well,

condenser

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the condenser

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and

generator

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the generator

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Firstly

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, cold

water

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pumped

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down about 4.5 km to the injection well. After that

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apply

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underground

water

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travel

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travels

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to the production well

via

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passing through the geothermal zone; which is

also

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known as hot rocks, where

water

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temperature

rise

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significantly.

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, in the following step from

production

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the production

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well

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apply

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hot

water

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pumps up to the condenser chamber.

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, in the

chamber

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the steam is being produced by condensation of hot

water

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, that steam enters in a

last

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stage where it goes in

turbine

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which is powered by steam and that turbine

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is use

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use

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powered

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power

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generator

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a generator

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which at

end

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the end

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serves the electricity.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

147 words

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