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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
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waste
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production
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 in six different countries from 1990 to 2000.
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, the US constantly occupied the highest number of
waste
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production
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 over 2 decades
while
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 Ireland, Poland and Portugal had the
least
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lowest
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 numbers.
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, other countries namely Japan,
Korea
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and Korea
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 had significant numbers. Look at the table in more detail. The
amount
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 of
waste
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production
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 in the US was 131
million
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 in 1980, which rose dramatically to 192
million
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 in 2000. Japan followed
this
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 similar trend when the
amount
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 doubled from 28
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 to 53
million
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 over 2 decades. In 1980, the
amount
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 of
waste
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production
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 in Ireland, Poland and Portugal was above 4
million
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 per
tonnes
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, which increased remarkably to approximately 6
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. Korea witnessed a
contrast
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 trend when the
amount
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 of
waste
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production
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 was 32 in 1990 and decreased significantly to 19 in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, amount, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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