The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar
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illustrates the main exports in Southland in 2000, 20
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, and gives
afuture
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a future
prediction for 2025 . Overview, International tourism , Dairy
products
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, and meat
products
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are the main shipments in the country .
Firstly
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,
the
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apply
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international tourism has increased
graually
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gradually
through the years , starting with 8
million
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pounds in 2000 ,
then
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9
million
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pounds in 20
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, and ending with a total of 10
million
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pound
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in 2025.
Secondly
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, Dairy
products
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has
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reached the maximum proportion in 20
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(10
million
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) and the minimum proportion was in 2000 (7
million
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) .
Thirdly
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, meat
products
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results
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a decline in exports , where it reached
it
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peak value in 2000 (6
million
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)
then
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slightly
decrease
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decreased
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to 5.5
million
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pound
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pounds
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and
finally
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will
be reached
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to
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5
million
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pound
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pounds
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by the end of year 2025.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • projections
  • market share
  • dominance
  • economic component
  • growth
  • preferences
  • international markets
  • consumer demand
  • significant percentage
  • substantial share
  • steady growth
  • future outlook
  • comparative analysis
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