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Band 7.5

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes •explain why you need to break the contract.

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about the problems regarding my bond. My name is Kunalpreet Singh, and I have been your tenant for the
last
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 10 months. The contract was for 1 year, but still for 2 months are left. Moving
further
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, I would like to request you to call off my commitment 2 months earlier
due to
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 strong reasons related to my profession. Currently, I am working as a Senior HR Manager, and I have got a transfer order from my company to another city.
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, it is not optional; it’s an order from the higher authorities. The agency was excellent, and I am fully satisfied with the services. Moving to a new place would be difficult for me as well. I apologize for leaving the flat in between and breaking the bond. Hereby, I request you to please understand my situation and terminate my contract. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Kunalpreet Singh

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task response
Make sure to clearly state your request to leave early at the beginning of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs with one main idea in each for better flow.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal closing, such as 'Sincerely' instead of 'Yours faithfully', as it suits the situation better.
task response
You provided a clear reason for leaving early, which is important in this situation.
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Your tone is polite and respectful throughout the letter.

Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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