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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Kausar 2

The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Kausar 2
The bar chart illustrates the book sales for five various
of
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fictions
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books
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 over the period between 2006 and 2010.
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,the highest sales figure was
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 by the Romance and Mystery genre
books
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,
while
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 the lowest rates were depicted by materials about
Sc-Fi
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 & Fantasy and
classic
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 over the whole time period. The Romance
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 book, which showed the highest rank in 2007 at $115,000, increased slightly after a fluctuation, reaching $85,000 in 2010. The mystery,
on the other hand
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, represented the second highest rank with a minor decline in
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sales, demonstrating ending at $75,000 in the same year. Over the whole time period, other all genres declined gradually till 2010.
Young
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 adult
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books
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, which started with a low of $ 17,000, dropped
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 $27,000 in 2010.
Fantasy
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The fantasy
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books
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 began at $18,000 and dropped
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 $15,000. The lowest rank represented classic
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genre’s
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books
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 started at $16,000
reduced
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and reduced
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 $13,000 after 4 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, genre’s with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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