The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams depict information about changes between the old and new
porth harbour
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Porth Harbour
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in 2000.
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, despite small changes in the
porth
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Porth
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harbour a new ferry is added and they
change
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changed
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the location of the cafes & shops, showers & toilets, and
build
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built
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a new hotel. After observing these maps, it can be seen clearly that, in 2000 the
porth
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port
harbour
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Harbour
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had only two passenger ferries, but now one more has been added. Previously, the showers & toilets were in the north above the car parking,
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now it transferred above the large car park on the waste side. Apart from
it
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that
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, the fishing boats and marina are replaced with each other.
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, the maps show that
,
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the cafes and shops are newly constructed in the south near the lifeboat.
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, in 2000, there was a castle opposite the lifeboat, which was disused, so now it has been replaced by a hotel.

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