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One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Say what product you want to recommend to him • Tell him where he / she can get this product • Explain why you want to recommend this product

Dear Neha, I hope you're doing great! Getting back to you on your request. I was so excited to hear about your new import and export business! What's an awesome move, and I'm sure you're going to do great. I've been thinking about what could really work well for you, and I've got the perfect product in
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mind- authentic Indian
spices
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. You can get these
spices
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 from the famous
makret
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market
 katchi, Kerala. It's huge and has vendors selling everything
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 as Cardamom, turmeric, garam masala, and saffron. I know some
relaible
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reliable
 suppliers who can offer you a variety of
spices
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 a reasonable price. I think, these days, everything is getting involved
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 cooking, and trying out different international
recpies
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recipes
, so
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 ingredients are high in demand. Plus,
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 thing about
spices
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 is that you don't need to worry about them going bad quickly as they've
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 shelf life.
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 makes them perfect for
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import and export businesses like yours.
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, give me a shout if you need any
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 information or if you want help setting up a meeting
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with
 the supplier . Yours Faithfully, Amanjot
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has one main idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Add more detail about the spices for better understanding.
coherence and cohesion
Check for spelling errors to make it look more professional.
suitable writing tone
Your friendly tone is very inviting and warm!

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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