In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In many places worldwide, it is getting easier to purchase meal and cooking

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from different nations in the local grocery stores. I believe it is a positive development as it exposes local people to a variety of foods and lowers the cost of getting particular cooking materials. Making

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things available in nearby supermarkets introduces local people to diverse delicacies which

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required them to travel internationally. As the popularity of international cuisine rises on the internet, it is more convenient for us to recreate the recipe at home.

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, the rise of Korean Pop increases the public curiosity and interest in Korean food. Now, the key ingredient of the Korean dish, Gochujang, has become one of the best-selling items.

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, the cost of getting

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food

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can be lowered.

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, it had to be directly imported from the origin which was burdened on the logistic fee and waiting time. Now, it can eventually cater specific needs of certain restaurants selling international dishes

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groups of expats and immigrants to get specific herbs and spices. It is very much needed in the global major cities like New York, London, and Melbourne, which are known as a melting pot of cultures.

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, the increased accessibility of global delicacies in local supermarkets is a positive development, especially in the global big towns. It is essential in presenting a wide variety of tastes and making imported food cheaper.

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Make sure to clearly define whether you think the development is more positive or negative. This can help the reader understand your position better.

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Try to use more linking words and phrases like 'firstly', 'furthermore', and 'in addition' to improve the flow between your ideas.

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Expand on your ideas a little more. For example, you could explain why exposure to different foods is beneficial for local people.

relevant specific examples

Your examples, such as the mention of Korean food and Gochujang, show a good understanding of the topic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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241 words

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society’, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

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