People from cities go to university more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside the cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees. To what extent do you agreee or disagree with this statement?

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matriculation in

cities

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is much higher than the ratio in the

country

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. To overcome

this

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problem, some

governmets

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governments

has

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introduced a

policy

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for the contextual evaluation

for

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of

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applicants

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in rural areas.

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, some opponents believe that

this

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policy

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is unfair since it deprives a chance of

students

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studied

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in

cities

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. In my opinion, it is important to ensure easier entry for

students

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who

had

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less

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fewer

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educational

opportunity

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opportunities

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in the countryside.

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with, major

applicants

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in

cities

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overlook the environmental

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difference

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differences

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between those in the

country

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.

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the educational infrastructures like high schools or colleges are mostly concentrated

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in

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few

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a few

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cities

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while

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there are lack of these facilities in remote regions.

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, a

difference

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of

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in

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accessibility between those two sites

make

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a

difference

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of

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in

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academic

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start line of

students

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. To deal with

this

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problem, several governments including South Korea tried to install state-run academies in rural districts.

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,

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was not as effective as the introduction of the additional consideration

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applicants

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in

such

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areas.

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, governments struggled

from

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the educational gap between rural areas and

cities

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finally

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and finally

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opened a wildcard: a contextual offer to the

country

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applicants

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.

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universities giving

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offers started to recognise the academic unfairness so they opened the door for these

students

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. These colleges required lower standards

to

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the

country

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applicants

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.

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,

this

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policy

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has been a hot potato

between

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among

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students

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since the cut-off grades for the

students

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with

such

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benefit

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benefits

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was

suprisingly

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surprisingly

lower than the city pupils’

one

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apply

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.

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, the average score

of

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on

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standardised

test

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tests

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in Seoul, South Korea was 20-30% higher than those

who

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in the countryside. Namely, the benefit for those

students

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brought another controversy of ‘fairness.’

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, I believe that the lower entry

requirment

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requirement

is vital for

students

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in

the

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remote

area

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areas

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. Of

course

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the academic requirement is the most important indicator

to select

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in selecting

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students

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, but the

difference

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of

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in

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the test

score

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scores

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might

be

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have

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originated from the better facilities and educational opportunities in the city. To give great

opportunity

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opportunities

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to

students

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in the

country

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,

this

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policy

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is inevitable. In conclusion, It is necessary to consider the background of the rural

students

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by

lower

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lowering

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huddle

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to enter colleges even though some complaints are suggested by the city

applicants

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.