The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
From looking at the plans we can easily say
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is a well-designed urban development project which aims to transform an industrial area into a brand-new urban riverside community. The old factories were planned to be replaced by not only housing but
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a medical
center
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, new shops and a school for new residents.
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way the planned community will have diverse and useful amenities near distance to their new homes. The site is already close to town which makes it ideal for newcomers who want easy access to even additional amenities including even more shops and stores, more school options and maybe a more vibrant food scene. The community is not only riverside but
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close to farmland which can be both good and bad depending on the farm. If it is an organic farmland with various fresh fruits and veggies it can be a healthy and affordable option for potential residents
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if the owners of the farms use heavy pesticides and other harmful chemicals for the products, it can significantly affect the air quality of the area and cause potential health problems for residents in both short and the long run.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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