The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total of car thefts per thousand vehicles in Great Britain, Sweden,
France
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, and
Canada
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over a period of ten years, from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, thefts in Sweden have increased significantly in the
last
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few years,
while
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in
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this
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period has gone down a lot in Great Britain.
Moreover
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, car thefts in
France
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and
Canada
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have remained almost constant in all years. From 1990 to 1992
it is clear that
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car theft increased in Great Britain, between 1992 and 1993 decreased, from 1993 to 1996 increased slightly, and from 1996 to 1999 decreased slightly,
while
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in Sweden increased significantly from 1990 to 1999.
while
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in
France
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and
Canada
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are decreased From 1990 to 1993, in
Canada
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increased gradually between 1993 to 1999 , but in
France
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increased gradually between 1993 and 1995, and it started to decrease gradually from 1995 to 1999, ending the period at a slightly lower level than before.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • theft rate
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • vehicle theft
  • per thousand vehicles
  • decade
  • steady increase
  • steep decline
  • comparative analysis
  • noteworthy changes
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