29 June 2025, The graph gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.

29 June 2025, The graph gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 29 June 2025, The graph gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.
The line graph presents the amount of clothing
exports
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by three different countries from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
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, Colombian clothing
exports
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increased gradually, reaching a peak,
while
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Japanese garment
exports
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experienced a small rise followed by a decline. Meanwhile, garment
exports
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from Myanmar fluctuated significantly. In terms of Myanmar apparel
exports
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, the figure rose sharply from around $5
million
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in 1999 to $900
million
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in 2001, making it the largest amount in 2001 and 2002.
However
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,
this
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figure recorded a major decrease of $350
million
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by 2002,
although
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it increased slightly in the final year to reach just over $400
million
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.
By comparison
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, apparel
exports
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from Colombia experienced growth in almost all years from $450
million
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to exactly $700
million
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, despite a slight drop in 2003 (at $600
million
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).
On the other hand
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, Japanese clothing
exports
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accounted for approximately $580
million
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in 1999, representing the highest export among the three countries.
Then
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, it fell marginally by around $20
million
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, narrowing the gap with Colombia.
Although
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this
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country experienced minor growth in 2001, at exactly $600
million
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, it declined again in the remaining years, reaching
at
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$500
million
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in 2003.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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