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people
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motivation
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work
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abality
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ability
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it puts high Remove the conjunction
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pressure
individuals
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nagetivly
their mental health.
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negatively
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, others believe that we need to cooperate Linking Words
instead
of competing with each other because it Linking Words
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us to learn Correct your spelling
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work
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