The graph below shows that the percentage of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 and 2012.

The line graph compares the percentage of Australian exports to Japan,the US, China and India between 1990 and 2012.

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, Exportation to China increased rapidly during

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in other countries it remained constant. As the graph shows in Japan it started at 25 percent, and

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trend fell gradually under 20 per cent between 1990 and 2012. Export to the US started at 11% in 1990,and decreased slightly to 8, after reaching 11

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it experienced a gradual decrease to 5 % in 2010

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and increased a little to 7 in 2012.

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, Exportation from Australia to China started at 3% and rose gradually to 5 per cent in 2000,later it climbed rapidly to 25 between 2000 and 2010,and increased gradually to 28 in 2012.

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figure in India stayed stable at 1% from 1990 to 2000,and grew to 7 per cent in 2010,but fell to 5

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