The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map presents the planned basement of a public
library
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twenty years ago and
current
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the current
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.
Overall
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, the map shows that plan
has
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have
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been changes in the layout and purpose of different sections,
also
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shows that the
library
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is developed by adding electronic things and devices
such
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as
computer
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a computer
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room
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which help fill the community needs. Twenty years ago, when a person
entrance
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entered
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the
library
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, there
will be
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was
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an enquiry desk where he
can
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could
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buy tickets
book
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books
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..etc and on the right a reading
room
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for
newspapres
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newspapers
& magazines on the left.
Moreover
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, tables and chairs are available in the middle of the
library
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. Other facilities that
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library
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the library
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had are a place for
chlidern's
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children's
books and
computer
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a computer
show examples
room
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. The
library
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today is totally changed
,
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apply
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when someone
enreance
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entrance
enhance
the central
library
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, he will see there is a cafe on his right and all
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the refernce
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refernce bokks
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reference books
and his left. A
lecutr
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lecture
room
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has recently
has
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apply
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been added to the
library
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floor.
In contrast
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, the old floor had
a
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apply
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tables and chairs to sit in, but now there are two
sofa
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sofas
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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