There are some problems in the changing room in your sport center. Write a letter to the sport center manager. In your letter, you should: - Describe the problems in the changing room - Explain why the sport center is important for you - Suggest what the manager should do.

Hello Dear, I hope you are doing well, I am going to introduce issues in my short
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. and explain how much the short
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is necessary to me
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I am going to suggest to you some solutions to improve your market. First of all, We have many problems in the
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room, especially in the changing room. We have issues with the wool there are three holes,
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, The light there is not working. the short
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is essential for me because I have a huge family unindependent and I do not have a source of finance other than the short
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. And
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I have so many customers come to me. I suggest you fix the changing room and replace the light,
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dye the wall. do all those suggestions if you want your shop to be attractive. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Kim Ryu

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coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs to separate your ideas better.
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Make sure to correct grammar and spelling errors to improve clarity.
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Include a more polite tone in your letter for a better impression.
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You clearly stated the problems in the changing room.
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You explained why the sport center is important to you.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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