The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (MINH BUI)
The given map describes the transformation of the school from 1985 to the present.
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, the school became more modernized, reducing the size of playing fields and car parks
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providing more options for leisure
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as a pool and a fitness centre. Looking at the map from a more detailed perspective, the largest part was the playing fields located at the bottom which became smaller and gave way to a brand-new fitness gym with an indoor pool in the south-west corner. the field was
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taken by 2 new classroom areas, one to the left and one to the right of it. In the west area, the library gave space to a learning resources centre including a computer room
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the car park and classrooms located next to the aforementioned place vanished. The 2-storey-classroom block located on the right side was constructed to become 3 storeys one In the middle, the road leading to the playing field was removed and they planted more trees in its place. To the south of
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road, the car park was narrowed and the road around it was curved.
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but not least, the number of students increased dramatically by 800 students throughout the given period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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