The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (CONG THANH)

The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (CONG THANH)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (CONG THANH)
The given diagram demonstrates the construction of home smokery and how to use the system.
Overall
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,The system clearly shows that
this
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is a man-made and linear process which includes 3 stages . The process starts with opening the lid on the pit to let in fresh
air
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and ends with enjoying smoked
fish
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.
First,
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we dig a pit and divide it into 3 areas for different purposes: fresh
air
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, fire and
smoke
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and hanging
fish
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. In the first stage , fresh
air
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enters to underground pit.
This
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fresh
air
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provides oxygen for flame and
therefore
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smoke
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. The second stage begins when we burn charcoal and wood to make a fire and
smoke
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for food . A pipe leads the
smoke
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to a box . In the final stages , the
smoke
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moves to box hang
fish
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to cook
fish
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after a long time .
Then
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we can enjoy
fish
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so delicious and good

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