The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (MINH BUI)

The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (MINH BUI)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works. (MINH BUI)
The given diagram illustrates how to cook delicious smoky foodstuff from fresh air . Looking at the diagram from a general perspective,
this
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is the linear man-made process of cooking smoky fish including 3 stages. It starts with fresh air goes into the pit and ends with the smoked fish hung on the rope. Looking at the diagram from a more detailed perspective, first of all, the lid of the first pit is opened so that the clean wind can enter because it provides enough oxygen which helps
keeping
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keep
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the fire burning in the second pit.
Secondly
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, the second chamber contains the burned wood that produces enough smoke for cooking, the lid of it is fully sealed to keep smoke in.
Last
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but not least, the fresh meat and fish
is
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are
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hung on the ceiling in the above ground level box
while
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the barrel under it contains the oil from the fresh food which makes the taste and flavour of it become more special and tasty

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