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Band 7.5

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. -Suggest solutions to the problem.

Dear Mr John. I am writing to bring your attention to a few matters I am a resident of the community, and I have been living here for the past 5 years in the Hudson Lane Kingsway camp. In our community, the roads are not being done properly and are safe for pedestrians, local residents, and drivers.
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, now work is started and it creates problems like its noise disturbs us and during the night we are not able to sleep properly, and in the daytime, we are not able to work properly
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. I will suggest some solutions to mitigate the problem
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 as limiting work hours to less disruptive times, using quieter machinery, or providing temporary noise barriers.
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, the working hours are shifting to morning time and in the evening time local residents will sleep and relax from a tied schedule. I hope you will consider
this
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 matter as soon as possible! Yours Sincerely, Mark

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It would be beneficial to provide more specific examples of how the noise is affecting daily life, which would enhance the impact of your complaint.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly. For instance, separating the description of the problem from potential solutions could improve clarity.
task achievement
Consider modifying the opening of the letter to express more formally who you are, perhaps including your exact address for better identification.
task achievement
The letter effectively communicates the issue you are facing and proposes practical solutions, which shows initiative and thoughtfulness in addressing community concerns.
coherence and cohesion
Your polite closing reinforces a positive tone in the letter, making it more persuasive and mature.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Local council
  • Disturbance
  • Resident
  • Noise pollution
  • Disruption
  • Work-from-home
  • Well-being
  • Adequate notice
  • Inconvenience
  • Noise control measures
  • Temporary relocation
  • Work schedule
  • Prompt attention
  • Amicable resolution
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