The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of people who used 4 different means of transport,
such
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as bus, bike, car and foot in a European city in 1960,1980 and in 2000.
Overall
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,the percentage of travellers who used busses and cars rose gradually during these years,
while
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people who moved by bike ,and on foot fell slightly. In 1960 the bus was at 17% and increased gradually to 26 per
cent
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,
then
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it fell to 16% in 2000.The percentage of those who used cars started at 6 per
cent
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and climbed rapidly to 23 in 1980,later
this
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trend grew to 36
at the end
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.
By contrast
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, bikes were at 25 per
cent
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in 1960
,
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and fell slowly to 20 after in,2000 it was at 6 per
cent
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. Users, who moved on foot were at 34 in 1960,
this
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figure declined rapidly just above 15 per
cent
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in 1980, later it decreased steadily to 9
at the end
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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